I finally uploaded Unicorn Bait to Smashwords (and then uploaded four more times as I tried to figure out what I did wrong in formatting). It is FREE!
With this new edit, I added unicorn factoids to each chapter beginning. They were fun. I fleshed out a few scenes and adjusted a few things for story flow/logic. I am sure there are many grammatical and spelling problems I failed to fix, though I've read over this thing twice now in preparation. I hope readers enjoy the story.
Since uploading it Thursday night/Friday morning, it has been downloaded 130 times, which is just great in my estimation.
If anyone downloads this story to reader, I'd like to know if it looks okay. I don't have a Nook or Sony Reader so can't access to see if the formatting is screwy.
Here is the link to Unicorn Bait on Smashwords.